Friday, January 2, 2009

some experiments in form

a few things i've been working on... not completely happy with any of them

you do not
want me to stay...
winter solstice

winter sunlight
is so thin
trees seem more naked

sudden warmth...
eyes meet over the fire...
solstice night

winter solstice...
the night seems longer
without him

true words
but wrong
i walk into the night
kicking at dead leaves

the longest night~
howling winds emphasize
the point

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